Le vieil homme,quiPay attention to the antecedent and use the right relative pronoun. Note that the relative pronoun "that" is not used in non-defining relative clauses (preceded by a comma). venait d'être admis à l'hôpitalUse the appropriate grammatical tense to express anteriority in a past context. Although no date in mentioned, the following verbal group ("a été victime") also refers to a past context; do not use the present perfect!, a été victimeWhen it is used transitively (i.e. without the preposition "from"), the verb suffer may be used to refer to a sudden, unpleasant event or an injury. d'une crise cardiaque dévastatrice.